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Memorable in the end

April 15, 2016 08:59

ByAnne Garvey
, Anne Garvey

1 min read

Danny Scheinmann's The Half Life of Joshua Jones produced by John Mitchinson's Unbound imprimatur (£14.99) with a huge list of crowd-funding contributors, is the follow up to the author's best-selling Random Acts of Heroic Love, which, described by one reviewer as a five-star title, was translated into 21 languages.

The new follow-up book's eponymous protagonist is about as far from heroic as is possible to be - cowardly, casually cruel at times, hugely self-absorbed and with all the insight of a restless 15-year-old.

In fact, the action is so chaotic that the narrative is rendered mystifyingly disjointed.

With a central character as self-indulgent and scatty as this one, his story is a hard one to get started on. Add to this some egregious stylistic tics calling out for an editor - John Mitchinson, where were you when "huh" penetrated this frail hero's distracted ruminations, huh? Or when tired clichés - "his eyes twinkled fondly", and worse - crept into descriptions of peripheral characters?